The first time I saw…

The first time I saw him. It was fall. We were at work. The days were long. His eyes. They were brown not blue like I first thought. He was tall. It was love. He knew it last.

*This is a response to a 33 word prompt. A Trifecta writing challenge.

3 Responses to The first time I saw…

  1. Love the short sentences. They really give your piece a sense of flow and energy. I like your closing line best but, the whole piece is good. Well done.

  2. Great work.

  3. But at least he knew it. :-) Thanks for linking up.

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